July 1st, 2012: JSC Update and Rewrite

Hello Friends,

I decided that things needed fixed in the Jane Smith Chronicles. Chapter one needed some work and chapter two was garbage. Chapter two got a major rewrite both in style and plot. I am much happier with it but I think their may still be a third edition when I get to revisit it again with a fresh set of eyes. Please take a look and let me know what your thoughts are.

 

Cao,