July 1st, 2012: JSC Update and Rewrite

Hello Friends,

I decided that things needed fixed in the Jane Smith Chronicles. Chapter one needed some work and chapter two was garbage. Chapter two got a major rewrite both in style and plot. I am much happier with it but I think their may still be a third edition when I get to revisit it again with a fresh set of eyes. Please take a look and let me know what your thoughts are.

 

Cao,

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Bucci, as he's known to friends and co-workers, is a former small business owner turned full time student at Point Park University where he is studying Stage Management and Theatre Tech. He is almost constantly working but occasionally he takes a break to pursue his hobbies of drinking wine and writing. He writes with the inspiration of the people he sees, knows, and often loves. He is the founder of Magnesium Shower and The Guide To Being On Your Own.

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